Tuesday, October 29, 2013

Vocab #8

1. Candy is very savory and I enjoy eating it.
2. I am always enticed when I see food to eat it.
3. I dislike when people are tactless to other people.
4. They showed integrity by not wearing provocative cloths.
5. If I get good grades my parents compensate me.
6. I am always aloof in class.
7. I dislike when my brother goads me!
8. My cohort is amazing and I have known her since 2nd grade.

Friday, October 4, 2013

Literature Analysis #1


# 1

                The plot of the book, The Lovely Bones, by Alice Sebold, exposition begins with Susie Salmon being murder one day while she was walking home. The death of Susie takes place right across the school she attends. The climax of the story begins when Susie’s killer is almost found, but the police do not have enough evidence to arrest the man. The inciting incident that takes place would have to be the death of Susie. The narrator fulfills the author’s purpose of the story to that there might be an after life, and that things all happen for a reason.

#2

                The team of this novel would have to be the sooner or later you must learn how to let go.

-“‘I am going,’ he said ‘Where?’ I asked ‘Don’t worry, sweetheart. You’re so close’ “(261).

This quote shows how Susie’s grandfather is telling her to let go of her living family and that she must move on, in order for them to move on too.

#3

                The author’s tone would have to be anger, sad and happy.

-“’Bastard,’ he whispered. ‘You murderous bastard’” (137).

This explains how Susie’s father, Jack, feels angered about the man that he thinks killed his daughter.

-“somehow numbed her into disbelief-shattered” (28).

This explains how Susie’s mother feels when the detective shows her a piece of clothing that Susie was wearing before she died; the detective was holding the hat that had a pompom at the top of it. Her mother feels as her life has just ended because she now thinks that Susie is dead.

-“’ Granddaddy,’ I said. . . . I knew as we danced that something was happening on Earth and in heaven. A shifting” (260-261)

This shows how Susie is happy to see her grandfather in heaven and how she thinks something good is happing on Earth.

#4

-“He could feel the bump of the man’s body hitting the truck only a few feet from where he lay curled up inside” (190).

This quote shows an inciting incident because this is reason why Mr. Harvey, Susie’s Murder, started killing people, for revenge.

-“But I had to turn my back on heaven. I could do nothing trapped in my perfect world” (139-140).

Susie is having an internal conflict, because she wants to help her family and wishes she was not in heave so she id having conflict with herself.

-“’You know something,’ my father said. ‘Go home. I can’t help you’” (57).

This shows external conflict between Mr. Harvey and Susie’s dad. This shows how Susie’s dad knows that Mr. Harvey has something to do with the murder of Susie’s death.

-“There was my silver charm bracelet” (51).

Susie’s silver bracelet is very symbolic, because she wore it everywhere and it is going to be a very crucial detail in the novel.

-“The earth will swallow it

Wednesday, October 2, 2013

Antigone Compare and Contrast Final Draft


Antigone Compare and Contrast

In Antigone Sophocles, Eteocles was killed and Antigone buried him. But Creon got mad, and thought a man burred Eteocles’ dead body. Later on Creon gets punished and horrible things start to happen to his family.

                Antigone and Creon are very different from each other. Antigone is loyal to her family, but on the other hand Creon is loyal to the state.  It is obvious that Antigone is loyal to her family when she says, “with military honors, gave him a soldier’s funeral” (Prologue. 15). This quote explains how she honored her brother, Eteocles, and how she honored her family. Antigone is also loyal to the gods when she decides to dust some dirt over Eteocles’ dead body. Creon is loyal to the state; you can tell he is loyal to the state when he says, “I, as the next in blood have succeeded to the full power of the throne” (1. 17-19). In this quote it shows how Creon wanted to take over the thrown and how he would do anything to be loyal to the state. Creon is also not loyal to his family, because he does not care about what the Teiresias, a bild prophet, told him that horrible things will happen to him and his family. Therefore, they are completely different from each other.

                Even though Antigone and Creon have many differences, they both also have similarities as well. For example, when Antigone says, “No more, Ismene. You are alive, but I belong to death”(2. 164). This quote explains how Antigone has a lot of pride to let herself die and her sister Ismene, because she has done nothing bad. Antigone also refuses to leave her brother Eteocles unburied, so she risks her life, just so that her brother’s body is buried. Creon also has pride when he does not listen to the blind prophet when he says, “And the Furies and the dark gods of Hell are swift with terrible punishment for you” (5.82). This shows how it takes a lot of pride for Creon not to take the prophet seriously. Creon also has too much pride to believe that a woman can do such a thing and bury Eteocles. This shows how prideful and how he is positive a man had to bury Eteocles. These are a couple of examples of how Antigone and Creon are alike.

                Antigone deserves some of the blame because if she would have never buried her brother, there would have never been in a feud with Creon. But Creon should also deserve some blame because he just makes things worse and trying to kill people who did not take action in this ‘crime’. Also if Antigone would have not buried Eteocles there would not be any problems in the first place. After all these tragic incidents, it leads to Antigone’s death and the death of Creon and his family.

Tuesday, October 1, 2013


Wish                              Prediction (What will Happen)                 Consequence

to read peoples minds

you will find out a lot of things

you might hear things that were not meant to be heard

see the future

that you will see the future and what will happen next

if you can see the future you might want to change it and thing will not be the same because you would have changed what was suppose to happen

have photographic memory
you will pass any test

life would be to easy